I made an appointment for 9:30 this morning at the writing
lab. I was, honestly, not too excited about this, but now I am so glad I went.
It turned out to be a great experience, and I would not even mind going back
again before the final draft is due. Thirty minutes was a short time to go
through my whole paper, but we spent the time well. First we decided on what we
would work on because of our time frame. I did not bring and introduction or
conclusion, but we did work on those. She gave me some great ideas for both of
them. She told me to go through my paper and underline the most important
sentence in each paragraph. We started by reading through the paper and fixing
errors that stuck out. She did some reconstructing and reorganizing which will
definitely help my paper be clearer. I told her I was struggling with the
counter-argument of the paper so she helped me with that as well. We came up
with a clear argument that I am confident about. My topic was somewhat unclear,
but now I know exactly what direction my paper will be going. Now I will go
back and correct all of the obvious mistakes. I will then reorganize my
paragraphs and do a little bit more research on my counter-argument. I also
struggled with the tense that I would use because I was switching off very
often. She explained how to fix that and what would sound best where. We added
a few paragraphs so the word count should not be a problem. My paper went from
around seven paragraphs to about twelve paragraphs. This is a huge improvement
already. The only thing I am concerned with now is citation issues. She helped
me get the right idea about that as well because my in-text citations were not
looking so good. I definitely realized I needed to look up in-text citations on
Perdue Owl. The writing center is most definitely something I will use now throughout
my college career. It has improved my paper drastically. This experience has
made me think about things I would have never thought about before. My writing
is improving every day and the writing center is another great step in helping
this process. I am excited about getting this paper written and seeing the
improvement reflect on my grade.
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